Krallen(done....again)

(sorry for all the mistakes, i did most of this on a dsi browser)


Race: Mandalorian

Sex: male

Height:6,0

Name: Krallen Malan

Age: 34

Faction: Bounty Hunter

Class: 5th

Personality: Tough as nails and Ready for any kind of fight. has a short temper, doesn't enjoy helping for free but he ends up doing most things for free. takes mandalorian culture seriously

Physical Appearance: Big about 6'0, Brown hair Buzz cut, Green trusting eyes, muscular build, 5 o'clock shadow, has a roguish smirk on his face when he is pursuing his target(s) and scowl look on his face when he's not, usually wearing his armor and when he's not he is in Business attire. he is always sitting up straight which makes him appear even bigger.

Arsenal

Weapon: Heavy Blaster Rifle

Clothing/Armor: Grey Mandolorian armor.

Improv: Switchblade in Glove

Accessories: flower necklace tied to his wrist

History: Growing up on Mandalore with his family he had average Mandalorian family life. His father ran a weapon's shop and his mother was the bouncer, people say he has his mothers strength and his fathers build. His father taught him all he needed to know about repairing weapons and his mother taught him hand to hand combat because she always said "if you need to get something done do it with your hands". When Krallen became 17 he left home and got a job on tatooine as a bouncer in a Bar, thats where he met his wife Mari. Krallen and Mari soon married they then opened up a Weapon Shop like his fathers and 7 years later had a daughter Eras. Near the end of the Grand War his daughter Eras turned 6 and Krallen had gone into town and bought a necklace for his daughter, when he returned back to the shop the door appeared to have been blown off by something. the shop destroyed he scrambled through the shops ruin's looking for his family, unfortunately he did and found his wife and daughter dead in the back room. devastated he buried their bodies and looked over his security tapes and watched as a sith destroyed his shop kill his family. krallen didn't know why they did this but he was gonna kill that sith , he put on his armor and grabbed his rifle, after 4 years of searching he finally caught the sith and killed with his own lightsaber. now he is a bounty hunter doing any job no matter what the risk.

RP-Sample: Krallen walked into a bar on Corusant, his target, a drunk sitting in a booth near the wall. krallen walked up and sat down across from him "Your a bit late on your payments" krallen said coldly "you can come with me or i can kill you here, don't even think of running". the drunk got up and tried to steady himself and he went with Krallen towards the door, as soon as they were outside his target bolted off through the crowd, krallen walked after him. his target ran into an empty alley "now you should've listened to me" krallen said as he raised his rifle. "what is it you want!? i got credit-" the drunk tried to reason, but krallen cut him off by shooting him in the head. krallen took what little credits the target had off his body, climbed into his speeder and sped off to his employer.

1) You don't have an RP-Sample or Biography.

2) Explain your physical appearance in at least 5 sentences, or with a picture.

3) And, is your Species Human or Mandalorian? Because trust me, there is a difference.

When you've added the above, and explained them... I'll take a second look.

He's right is you bio before or durning the great war

Alright, looks good...

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